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If I Could

Lane

New member
this isn`t my latest project and we are still working on a video for the music

I wanted to say something about love, loss, hope and fear in two or three words...If I Could..seemed to say it all.
I hope its ok to put a link" here.​



If I Could

damn the night, damn the fear in this heart,
and every word that tore Us apart.
If I could back-up to Our last good-by,
and take back every alibi...

chorus:

If I Could,
could You love.

damn the night,damn this wanting in Me,
the little things I just couldn`t see.
If We could give it one more try,
take away all the hurting inside..

chorus:

If I Could,
could You love.

Bridge:

All of the memories
are a part of Me..
and the life I`ve lived, theres this tragedy.
If I could change it all,bring Us back somehow,
I`d sit down to write a brand new history.


damn the night,damn this wanting in Me,
the little things I just couldn`t see.
If We could give it one more try,
take away all the hurting inside..

chorus:

If I Could,
could You love...

If I Could,
could You love...Me.

© Copyright 2010 Sound-Off Vincent
© Copyright 2010 Second-hand Hearts Vincent
 

Ironman

Well-known member
Yeah, that was pretty good!

I'm not a big fan of country, but that I liked. Nice work Lane.

:cool:
 

Cowboy

Wait for it.
GOLD Site Supporter
I LOVE it!!! :clap: Thank you so much for sharing. Are you doing the singing too?:wow:

I got a agree with the Ladys here Lane, I love it as well . Great message ,tune & voice, very well done . :applause:

I'm also glad to see you have the copyright covered . I look forward to hearing more. :wink:

Pay no nevermind to some of the fellers here , only good music they know is what they here at the local strip joint . :yankchain: :biggrin:
 

NorthernRedneck

Well-known member
GOLD Site Supporter
Sounded great! I like the nice clear sound. Fingerpicking was right on. Kind of my style of fingerpicking with a bit of a twist. I like it! Even though I'm not a huge country fan. That was good!
 

Lane

New member
first off, thank you all for taking time to give this a listen.
kioho, ironman, lobo..if your not into country the comments really mean a lot.

jackie, I do sing, but I shipped this to a friend for demo, and he wanted to sing it, after I heard.. there was a honesty in his voice I don`t think I could replace.

cowboy, thank you for commenting, and giving this a listen. I got some bar room stuff I spring on them! lol

thanks so much pirate_girl for stopping-in and commenting it does mean alot to have others take time to reply.

groomer, when I wrote the music, I wanted to keep it wide" you or I could sing it, or babyface" could too...lol I kept it simple progression. I wanted the song simple, and clean. I think the accoustic added that. my new project is along the same lines..god I write these sad pathic songs..lol and i`m not a sad guy" a little pathic maybe...but not sad..lol!!!


thank you ohioTC18 for jumping in here and giving this a listen.

Hi mosi, nice to meet you, thanks so much for commenting on this.
 

Doc

Bottoms Up
Staff member
GOLD Site Supporter
Good song Lane. Not many songs I like right off but this one I did. Very well performed by your friend. How did you do the harmony? Was that his voice merged together from different tracks? Very kewl none the less.

I hope you'll post more of your stuff here. :thumb:
 

Lane

New member
thanks again Doc for taking time to give this a listen..yes a voice is just tracked and added. there is a bit of work involved getting it all right. i have a new project i`m` working on, and as soon as I get it close" i`ll share it with you all.
 
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