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Old 04-17-2012, 11:57 AM
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Default if i died tomorrow

if i should die tomorrow.

if i should die tomorrow,

what would you all do?

carry on as normal,

or feel the same way too?

would it be a blessing,

that i'm no longer here?

or would you talk about me,

and shed a thousand tears?

let me ask a question,

let me ask you this.

do you care about me?

are you on my list?

if i should die tomorrow,

what would you all say

would you push it all aside?

and celebrate today?

or are you feeling angry,

hurt, lonely, or sad?

are you thinking about,
oppotunities you had?

a chance to make life better,

but you let the days slip by,

now i'm not here to listen,

how do you feel tonight?

if i should die tomorrow,

yes it's sad, i know

but if you really loved me,

then you would let me go.

let my life be finished,

let the curtain drop

let the pain and suffering,

and everything else just stop

cos i'm sick of all the faking,

trying to wear a mask

trying to be someone i'm not,

was really a daunting task

but if by chance you're lonely,

and you want to search for me,

i'll be with the angels,

i'm at peace,

i'm free....
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Default Re: if i died tomorrow

Such an emotional poem. But atleast, if death comes with us, we'll be stress-free esp. when we're going to Christ. Celebrate!
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